I saw it in neon lights burning
And read it in the print
“There is a big show coming
Bigger than one have dreamt”
It celebrates the hope and love
And defeats and sorrows too
It has all the flavours
Of birth, death and “I do”
Oppurtunity knocks never twice
So lets take this chance
It is totally upto to you
Whether you wanna sit or dance.
So pack your bags and get your ticket,
Come and lets take a ride
I am sure as the show ends
You ll wonder “What a life!”
My attempt at Carry on tuesday "Life is a ticket to the greatest show on earth" inspired by Titaxy.
WOw :)
ReplyDeletethnks dido!!glad u liked it..:D
ReplyDeleteit sure matched the theme!
ReplyDeletemy fav lines:
"It celebrates the hope and love
And defeats and sorrows too
It has all the flavours
Of birth, death and “I do”"
***applause***
Loved it and the neon lites. life is full of surprises and beautiful sights.
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Its awsome really!!!
ReplyDeleteNice one... My fav lines are
ReplyDeleteOppurtunity knocks never twice
So lets take this chance
It is totally upto to you
Whether you wanna sit or dance
very well done dear :)
ReplyDeleteloved the last stanza
wow..awsome
ReplyDeletemy fav lines
"Oppurtunity knocks never twice
So lets take this chance
It is totally upto to you
Whether you wanna sit or dance"
keep writing :)
Yes! I love your upbeat poem about life's possibilities.
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@titaxy thanks daa..
ReplyDelete@ larry, neha thanks for the encouraging words..neha, it feels nice that you liked it..afterall you really are a master in poetry:)
@medhini welcome here..loved reading yours too
@celestialrays, shruti thanks for your encouraging words yaa..
@shrutzz, Neha: glad you liked:D
@lilibeth loved yours too:)) thanks for the nice words...welcome here yaa...